hw 45 response to comments: THANK YOU!

Response to Stephanie:
I agree hospital births are horrible and not ideally what we expected. Thank you for commenting on my blog, i am glad you found it interesting yet comical. Pissed off? Do you really think that their anger is a result of things like my story? Once the doctor got to my mother he basically just received my sister and they then cut the umbilical cord.

Response to Eloise:
I am glad we can agree on our birth decision. I like your comment that said," I also really valued that you wrote a narrative I think it changes from an essay and shows the true emotional side of birth, you make that clear expecially with the discription of your mothers hospital stay." A narrative was my idea. But i tried making it a bit comical which stephanie picked up on. I really love how you noticed my emotional aspect in the story because there was emotion to it. I wrote exactly as i remembered it and without thought of switching it up. When you said that you though of it as proof of another women empowering herself i found that very interesting. Once again thank you. 


Response to Natalie:
Thank you for commenting on my blog. I am content knowing you enjoyed my blog even though i could have used more analysis. I agree with you when you said that, "The fact that the nurse would even attempt to push the baby back into the mother is horrifying." It is a horrifying idea. i can't believe she did that either. We could have filed a complain for that. It is more convenient because that shows that the commodities are provided for them and the mother or child.  


Response to Johnny:
Thank you for reading my blog, i could have used more connections. Perhaps it would have made my argument stronger.

Response to Jessica:
My second sisters deliver definitely was a struggle! The pressure was intense especially because she was premature and we didn't know what the outcome would look like. She is healthy now although super skinny. I think that has to do with the fact that she was premature. Covering an aspect that isn't really discussd to me seemed more interesting so i decided to share this story that not many know. Statistics would be great! I will definitely look into it.

Response to Amanda:
Not only was it an insight but also something unique some do not always hear. Unique was my point. Family can be greatly affected, i remember having my grandma and aunt in the waiting room very worried. I explore the memories as i write and i see it helped create an image which is great because i can give you a clear image of what i experienced. Finally i do agree with you. Sharing my moms story/pov would have made it stronger. That would have given a more clear understanding of why she still stands with her decision. I have to say i really disagree. i don't know why she insists in a hospital birth. Maybe i can explore and share some more. Thank you for reading my blog!